My first ever attempt on poetry and this came out of instincts....so i din even care to edit it.......................... It all came out today after my F slot ...Advanced Strutural Analysis class. I am trying to compose it into a song.....hope so it works
You said you weren’t sure
You said you weren’t right
You said you never knew it
You said you aren’t alive
But ……..buddy
You have done it well.
You said you were nervous
You said you are down
You said you are weak
You said u r gonna lose
But……….. Buddy
You have done it well.
good one buddy
ReplyDeletethere is some feel in the poem..cnttt it
but i dint understand who the "YOU" was in the poem????
was it just a imagination or about something that inspired u in writing it????
the "YOU" in the poem is myself........the actually i tried to write it as if its not me speaking but my heart to me........ anyways first one na....it jus cant be clear
ReplyDeletegud attempt n gud start ., read all ., luvd dem., fantastic n kalaposhanaa chaaala chaaala chaalaaa ne undi i accept :) jahapanaa :D
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